No, NO! It’s not what you think! I’m not talking about Hemingway writing about a three-way, or Michener writing… well, never mind what Michener might write. The mind boggles.
What I’m talking about is a topic that arose recently on the Dorothy-L listserv, the idea that some people write about particular topics with such passion and descriptive phrases that show a love… nay, a lust for a particular pastime or object. We’re talking about things like car porn, gun porn, airplane porn, food porn, desert racing porn, tool porn and even debt porn. (I have to admit that last one is beyond me….)
One Dorothy-L subscriber mentioned that an article in Washington Monthly said this about Tom Clancy: “Tom Clancy may not be able to write a good love scene between a man and a woman, but he can certainly write a good love scene between a man and a weapons system.”
But, I confess: when someone complained that a few people had labeled his choices of crime fiction as spy porn and he felt aggrieved about that, I was the one who suggested that the people who made that observation were not talking about sex in the traditional sense, but rather that the books he liked glorified the action and technique of spying, revelled in it, got into the depths of it and rolled around in the clandestine nature of it in fits of ecstasy. (Well, maybe I didn’t say it quite that way, but that’s what I meant.) The television show “24″ is a great example of spy porn.
So, in defense of those who may attach a label of “___________ porn” to any form of literature, I offered my own off-the-cuff version of a short passage of literary knife porn. For your reading enjoyment, here it is. (Oh, and unless you are in a strangely controlling work environment, it is Safe For Work.)
“Ronnie held the sleek Gerber Mark II in his hand, feeling the hilt warm to his touch. As he turned it, light from the street lamp outside the window glinted on the blade and seemed to travel along the polished, razor-sharp edge, at last flashing at the needle-like point like a star breaking through the firmament. He smiled and nodded. This was the one. He took up the sheath and slid the weapon into it, his lips slightly parted as the steel slipped home between the snugly caressing folds of leather. He pulled on his jacket, covering the sheath hanging beneath his arm and embraced it to him as a lover. No one else would know it was there… but he would. He could feel it.”
A few people wrote me off-list and told me they really liked it, and a couple said they felt strangely excited by reading it. I made a mental note of those folks and decided not to ever turn my back on them when there were sharp objects lying around. (I don’t have a Gerber Mark II, but I have held one before and they are very nice blades. I have a few knives, though, and probably the scariest one is my latest acquisition, a SOG SEAL Team knife, once called the SOG SEAL Knife 2000.)
Here’s what I’d love: If you are a writer, pick some subject or object you are really passionate about, and write a short “porn” piece about it—maybe 50 to 75 words—and post it here as a comment. Remember, this is NOT real porn, so descriptions of personal plumbing or reproductive/pleasuring are NOT what I’m interested in. I want to see how you can turn your hand to writing a short scene that evokes a feeling of passion… focus… perhaps even an obsession about an object or activity. See if you can make the readers here start to fan themselves.
If you are NOT a writer, I’ll bet you have read a piece somewhere that is a porn piece. Maybe it’s someone waxing rhapsodic about a particular car, or drooling over a certain computer. Show us that piece, either by typing it into the comment area, C&P’ing it in, or giving us a link to it.
Come on people, show us just how much verbal sensuality you can dredge up! And I make this offer: I will send a copy of The Writer’s Journey Journal to one of those who submits a sample of his or her own personal literary porn, chosen by a random drawing from among the names of those who submit samples. I will draw from among those names next week, and announce the winner here.
As someone once said, “Let the bloodbath begin….”
Copyright 2010 Tony Burton

#1 by Theresa de Valence on May 17th, 2010
No porn from me today, but I’m verrrrrrry interested in the responses you will get!
Best,
Theresa
#2 by Sylvia Dickey Smith on May 18th, 2010
Me, too, Theresa! But if I did, I guess my porn would have to be about books or food!
#3 by Tony Burton on May 18th, 2010
Oh, food porn! You know, I’ve seen a lot of that. Magazines like delicious and Bon Appetit are like the Playboy and Penthouse of food.
#4 by M. E. KEMP on May 18th, 2010
The splash of a waterfall with its mist of droplets soothed his mind and cooled his body as he lay in the tall grass. The image of a raven-haired beauty with ivory skin flashed through his memory. He raised one hand to his lips, enfolding it gently, pulling it in before the cruel crunch of his teeth destroyed its buttery goodness. He smiled as he ate the Lorna Doone cooky.
#5 by Tony Burton on May 18th, 2010
Ahhh, another food porn fan!
#6 by Gerrie Ferris Finger on May 18th, 2010
Chocolate porn is not just any food porn. But I’m saving it to go with the wine porn tonight.
#7 by Tony Burton on May 18th, 2010
As long as it is milk chocolate, I’m good with that. But I’ve never been able to enjoy that kinky dark chocolate stuff!
#8 by Larry Chavis on May 18th, 2010
She was lanky, long and lean, as she leaned there against the wall, smooth straight lines blending into impossible curves as he gazed down her length. Such a beauty she was! His hands twitched, aching to hold her as his eye caught the gleam of firelight reflecting from her gleaming brass patch-box. In all his days he’d never seen anything so beautiful, from her browned octagonal barrel to her case-hardened frizzen, as Jerome’s Kentucky rifle.
#9 by Tony Burton on May 18th, 2010
Oooh, Larry! You got me so nervous I dropped my possibles bag and spilled all my flints!
#10 by Larry Chavis on May 18th, 2010
Ah, flintlock porn … it’s a guy thing (mostly).
#11 by Barb Goffman on May 18th, 2010
My breath quickened. It was nearly time. Our weekly rendezvous. In moments we’d be together, and I’d melt into the pleasure, tuning out everything else. Sometimes I wish we had more time together, more time to for me to explore. But a part of me relished our limitations. They made every moment more precious. One day soon, we’ll have to part, but not now. Not today. Now I turn on my TV, “Lost” comes on, and I sigh in ecstasy.
#12 by Tony Burton on May 18th, 2010
Ah, but Barb! Soon that relationship will be over….
#13 by Barb Goffman on May 18th, 2010
Yes, sob. But Sawyer will always be in my dreams.
#14 by Irene Fleming on May 18th, 2010
When the positive print was dry Adam lay on the bed in his underwear smoking a Lucky Strike, blowing occasional smoke rings, while Emily ran the day’s output through the projector.
A feeling was stealing over her that she was born for this, to make moving pictures. Beautiful faces flickering in the dark. Smoke from Adam’s cigarette drifting across the shadow images. Mr. Potts’ best horse, muscles rippling under his gleaming coat, tearing across the field and in front of the camera with a twitch of his long tail. Breathtaking shots. Emily had never felt more alive. They had shot nearly five hundred feet of film, enough thrilling footage for half of a one-reel Western.
#15 by Tony Burton on May 18th, 2010
Now there’s a genre of literary porn I hadn’t considered: cinematography porn.
#16 by Irene Fleming on May 18th, 2010
It’s from THE EDGE OF RUIN. Sort of. I remembered the scene as being very hot, but when I went back and looked at it it wasn’t quite up to porn standards. So I threw in the horse.
#17 by Dory Stewart on May 18th, 2010
Okay, Tony.
You’ve got me hooked. How long ya’ think this can last?
A day? A week? A month?
Oh, hell and damnation! I’m in the for long haul!
. . . . .to think I finally got it out!
#18 by Holli Castillo on May 18th, 2010
Knife porn is an interesting choice being that knives are innately phallic, particularly in dreams:)
#19 by Tony Burton on May 18th, 2010
As are guns… but sometimes a dagger is just a dagger.